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A Memory of Our Love by ~kitkit201:iconkitkit201:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open




the days we spent are so vivid in my mind
we spent the nights together intertwined

when i saw you coming down the stairs
i could not breathe a hint of air

i felt your warmth in my arms
i want to protect you from any harm

i love your kisses at night
i know then that my dreams will take flight

i see you by my side
so i can admire your beautiful eyes

i love your head on my chest
there you'll find comfort and rest

i look into your eyes staring
i love you so much i can't stop caring

i hear your sweet voice over the line
i just want to be sure you are fine

i sometimes gaze to the stars above
wondering what i will do without your love

i know your love will always be there
thats why i worry, i care

how special you are in my heart
i don't want us to ever part

i never knew how life would be
until i found you and you found me
©2002-2009 ~kitkit201
:iconkitkit201:

Author's Comments

this is a poem i wrote for You back then, but it still means something more now...don't know if you remember, but I really liked this , as everything rhymed and fitted well together, so i wanted to post it up cuz this meant a lot to us....

i still Worried + sigh.. i still miss you..., ... this hurts soo much...... :( (Sad) call mee..... please...

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~d00bie Aug 17, 2002, 1:17:04 AM
Wilson...this is a beautiful poem. So touching and extremely powerful. It shows how strong your love is for her. I hope she calls you Wilson, and hang in there. Yet again, this is beautiful. Well done. +favlove

--
We're sown together,
She’s born to mesmerize,
Beside, astride her,
I die inside her.

--Placebo, Space Monkey.
:iconleafinsectman:
~leafinsectman Aug 17, 2002, 1:28:17 AM
Sounds like something someone would write when they're madly in love. Sucks that she's not getting back to you. But its more her loss, not so much yours. I hope you either hear from her or get over her. Take care!!
:iconkittyfox321:
~kittyfox321 Aug 17, 2002, 1:31:14 AM
They should definetly make a 'LOVE Deviation'. This poem is wonderfully beautiful, I found its beat, and its really moving. Awesome job!!!!!!!

--
When I was a child, my baby turtle ran away. I guess I could not tame the wild beast within him...

~Karian
:iconepiphany:
`epiphany Aug 17, 2002, 1:35:46 AM
Wow, i would certainly call someone who would write such a beautiful poem for me. Where is the damn "LOVE" deviation when yuou need it?!!?!
Goregeous work.... Love
:iconxiuying:
~xiuying Aug 17, 2002, 4:57:39 AM
oh, my god, that's so beautiful... breathtakingly beautiful... it makes me want to be the girl so i can lie in your lap and listen to you tell me sweet poems. :) (Smile) :) (Smile) :) (Smile) dear kitkitpoo, i hope everything works out.

--
______________________________ ____
//. self-obsessing in a world of gumdrops .//
:iconkebz:
~kebz Aug 17, 2002, 5:01:45 AM
definatly from the heart, such a beautiful poem. you must really love this girl.
i hope the best for you two!

--
:invisible: kebz
:iconshortymv:
~shortymv Aug 17, 2002, 8:08:06 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD LIFE!!!!!WITH YOUR LOVE ONE!!!
Petting is sensual! Hug Love

--
I am Shorty......look at my page....u might like what you see....untill then lets go be crazy!!! :O_o:
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~scorpio1 Aug 17, 2002, 8:18:27 AM
If the hands of time is for you and her so I may say Congratulations.
Nice poem kitkit.
:iconjoe-schmoe:
~joe-schmoe Aug 17, 2002, 9:36:45 AM
such a sweet poem, and excellent rythm, and rhyming. Great work.

--
"at 4 in the morning you know where i'll be... im running red lights asleep at the wheel"
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